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Starting over
Starting you
Making me resolute
Give me hope
Give me chance
To continue life's glorious dance
Love me, dear
Love me true
Help me love something new
I sincerely resolve
To be true to you
Forever and always
That is how long I will Love You.
Starting you
Making me resolute
Give me hope
Give me chance
To continue life's glorious dance
Love me, dear
Love me true
Help me love something new
I sincerely resolve
To be true to you
Forever and always
That is how long I will Love You.
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I don't really like this that much, it's not bad per say, just...average.
It has nothing different, not unique, just a generic love poem, it also has the 'I will love you forever and ever and only you, and nothing will ever change that', which I dislike, people change, as do situations, so...yeah.
Also that capitalized "L" in Love in the last part seems odd
It has nothing different, not unique, just a generic love poem, it also has the 'I will love you forever and ever and only you, and nothing will ever change that', which I dislike, people change, as do situations, so...yeah.
Also that capitalized "L" in Love in the last part seems odd